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R0: BEGINNINGS
PREVIOUS | END RUN | END
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And there we go.
I slightly messed up this page set, but I've a little too many things to get around to to fiddle with it any further.
Feedback much appreciated!
I know this short comic was far from perfect and largely experimental, but I think I would like to conduct my round entries in a similar style, therefore any feedback would be great!
chase, Diana, Rosalie textures, art (c) me
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First of all. I completely enjoyed this comic. Every style you incorporated, from the type letters to the aging paper look, fitted your story extremely well.
I only have one problem, and that's the word bubbles. Transparent word bubbles are always difficult, and it would have been better, in my opinion, if they were just opaque. The words would have been much more easier to read.
I only have one problem, and that's the word bubbles. Transparent word bubbles are always difficult, and it would have been better, in my opinion, if they were just opaque. The words would have been much more easier to read.